So Memory Fragments has started (if you don't know, check the March issue ^_^). Now I would like to hear some opinions and comments from the readers.

* How do you think the start of the story is? For example, does it look like a typical shoujo opening or does it has its unique (which I doubt) style?
* Can you easily predict the storyline from the pages?
* How do you find the characters so far? (I know Narumi is weird)
* What do I need to work more on? (except proportions and backgrounds X_X... because I know I am bad at those...)

Please post whatever you would like to say so I know what I can improve in the coming stories =D

-Ki

I like Memory Fragments. I'm not sure what you would need to work on. I'll say one thing though, the story line was a little bit 'easy'. Other than that, great job and I look forward to your upcoming manga stories!!! (-_-)

Thank you! I guess the storyline is really easy to guess... someone told me my banner gave spoilers about everything =_=... and I know it is true...

-Ki

* How do you think the start of the story is? For example, does it look like a typical shoujo opening or does it has its unique (which I doubt) style? Um... I can't really remember the starting. xD I really liked it thought. And the idea of the rings... Why didn't I have this idea?! xD
* Can you easily predict the storyline from the pages? Uh... Dunno. Mabye they'll be in love very soon, i think...? But sometimes it was easy, yes.
* How do you find the characters so far? (I know Narumi is weird) I liked Tsubasa's character (I like her name too). But I don't know... Girls in her age don't think like her. Like protecting a ring which was given to them when they were young... and Narumi-kun!!! Hehe, a bit weird guy, but very funny!! xD Like Chiaki from KKj with this kind of speaking ("Wanna hang out with me some time?"). I like him very much! ^-^
* What do I need to work more on? (except proportions and backgrounds X_X... because I know I am bad at those...) Um... Maybe the way you drawing the arms and legs. I like it 'cos it's a very own style of you, but sometimes the head is too big, and the body isn't fit with the head. And Tsubasa doesn't have... boobs. Why? xD

Thanks for your comments, Haine =D I will try to work hard on those points ^_^ For Tsubasa... um... well... I find drawing girls with big chests annoying somehow... although sometimes I accidentally draw them too big =_=

-Ki

Lol! I draw the girls chests depending on their character and age. ^^ Of course, so far most of my characters are flat. I'm flat so I just prefer it that way. >.> I have a hard time drawing guy's legs and hip. Sheesh... T.T

-Aqua_Dakemura

Yeah, I understand ^_^ Since I don't like to draw big chests... I limit the age of my characters to around 15-16 max =P

-Ki

Goodness Ki, you've made me laugh a lot today. XD I like having a wide range of ages...but of course I hate drawing children, unless it's for flashbacks.

-Aqua_Dakemura