Ah don't worry about it! I've always wanted bangs! XD Seriously though I think the bonus manga was cute. Wish we could see more of Saga of Magunchi though but what are ya gonna do? That said it's a bit too early to present an opinion on that one. Like I said before you draw animals very well. Your people aren't bad either. Just a few tips on improving though. Before you line in your characters sketch them out with circles and stick figures first. This is what I mean:
Basically get your proportions down (I had trouble with this at first) and start by drawing stick figures and pose them like
this.
You don't have to draw every shape every time. I sure didn't after the first time or so. Eventually you'll develop a shorthand of sorts that's all yours.
What helped me with proportions though wasn't this method really but some actual models. Not live models (I'm not into that thing) but dolls. If you can afford it you should get a doll or so from the
Obitsu group. The 21-27cm ones are very cheap ($18-$24 each). They're also extremely posable and you can base your proportions off of them too! After a while you may not be using them as much. My character models improved a lot when I used these dolls and I was very pleased. And if you have doll clothes, use them. The dolls can be kinda creepy otherwise. ~_~
Overall the easiest way to improve is just to keep drawing! : D
.......and im so happy that u like the dream manga office!i like it too..... 
and the manga in SJ will be update too~
