yuki-neko wrote:
I just read Turbulence, =3 you are good, I like the relation (sister-brother) XD. But I have a doubt, are they blood related O.o?, in case they are :3!. You can use that as a Taboo love story, just like "Koi Kaze" =p (but they didn't go further enough .__. I wanted more action).
Another thing is...you had some opportunities to turn the story a little more dramatic, for example in the part when the maid is cleaning the blood, I think you used too many chibis for that part and the part when she got punished. I know your story is a romantic-comedy but a little bit of serious parts wouldn't hurt =3.
It's sad that you are not going to continue with it .__. I know that you have many ideas for different stories, but if you don't get focused just on one and try to refine it. Then you'll end up with a whole bunch of so-so stories for one shots. Well that's up to you =p, good luck. I'll read your second manga later.
I'll continue reading the rest of the mangas.
Oh gosh, I didn't know I have forgotten to read this comment (stupid forum is always turning the new post indicators off...)
Yana & Kyo are not blood related. This is due to the fact that I don't do yaoi, yuri or incest mangas XD LOL I have been drawing too many chiibis lately... due to time constraints =P I agree that the manga will look better if there are more drama.... >.< but then I have never thought of a plot when I worked on this, and it turned out like this -_-...
My one-shots are aimed to be normal stories because they are used to help me relax when I am too concentrated on one manga =D Contradiction is the only one I am putting all my effort into right now.
Thank you so much for your suggestion =D I will try to work hard on my one-shots, but sometimes I just feel the page limit makes it hard to do anything dramatic =_=... and I am lazy...someone like me never think of a complete plot before I draw...
-Ki
